Photo Essay evaluation

My Evaluation
What I did for my photo essay to tell a story of our day out at the german market that myself and family were planning to go to.
so basically throughout the day I took pictures of what we were doing and what we were looking at also I took the picture of us leaving the house to get to the train station just so it actually tells the story.
after I had got the pictures I edited the pictures in Final Cut which what I did was get the pictures in order and put the bad pictures out of the timeline also what the video needed was a soundtrack I could either have noises that you would have heard at the german market or have some music I decided to go with the music , the reason I went for music is because the song I wanted to have for the  film (Arms Christina Perri) made it more dramatic and also it sorta builds up the tention as we get to Birmingham.
What I like about the video is the soundtrack that went with it and also I liked how it starts at the house in the day the ends with everyone returning to the house at night.
What I didnt really like about the video was that for some reason when I had exported the final thing the quality of the pictures had gone really bad and I dont really know the reason for it.
When I showed the group my video I had got a mux of good comments and areas how I could improve. What they got the story so I knew it actually told it well. What the people wanted me to improve on was that the music became bigger during the train journey scene but everyone thought it would have been better if it grew when you first see the market.
So In some spare time i had I just changed it to grow at that point in the film  where you see it.
If I could do this video again what id do differently would try to find a better camera and  also try to make the oictures change to the chord changes of the song